Rough Cut

Below is a rough cut of our thriller opening, this shows the style of what our thriller opening is going to look like. We have posted our rough cut onto youtube which allows us to recieve feedback from our target audience of what they like and dislike of our thriller opening. We are going to take these views into consideration and change anything that we agree on.



Feedback:Facebook messages:

Keeley Knell:

i think that your thriller opening is going to look really good, however it think that the writting needs to be made more better because cant really see it.the clips need to be made shorter as they drag on.

Lauren Walker:

oh wow i think its great, very impressed girls!!!!

Stacey Sorahan:
oooooo i reeeally like it :D  what stars you all areee!

Leanne Hillier:
i like the way that your titles are presented, and the part were you are in bed (night time effect) also that you used differant angles i.e at 1:29. The music is also relevent to the theme.

Tamara:
i liked yout thriller opening, i thought that it was interesting and keeps the viewers engaged. I also really liked the way Lauren walked past her stalker wihout knowing, thought that was a great idea.